I had finished my esmedted and I saw talking to my friend next miniter i found me and my friends in detson stapling picers of paper i see this booming shining light we walked closer to it …

We were all falling out of the sky i thought was i wearing a crop before we fall onto the ground max has all these mulss and even a six pack jordayne is a fat stubby guy kenda is a short boy I had a crop top on and red hair and we all have tattoos it was 3 black bars jordayne steps back and gets eaten by a hippo she comes flying out of the sky at speed one of her bars where gone well i should say one of his bars are gone .

I fleet something in my pocket I heard a beep I think what was that rocks start falling out of the sky we all die one of my  bars are gone.

A tour truck arvies the guy says hop in hurry up we all yelled  how do we get out of here well he said you have to return the gizmo into the center pad where the heck is that well who cares LET'S DO THIS I YELL ok well let's get to bisnis plese we hear a beep lets rock in roll .

Ok first we need to  set up camp for the night at this amazing place . I could hear elephants i was petrified i was about to pee my pants . They weren't elephants it saw the gizmo beep we had no bars left we get teleported to our houses, done done done the end .   

  

My favourite place

I turn, I steer, I see a paradise, as soon as my feet hit this beach I chuck my towel on a hill of white sand. I dive into the first humongous wave I see, the water is like it has glitter on top of it. I swim like a fish getting chased by a shark. My fingers start to turn into a prune. I see a school of fish swim by it was amaze balls. The crabs start to bite my toes, it felt like my eyes popped  out of my head.  Im sorry to say but my adventure is over at my favourite place, New Zealand is a amazing place.