My favourite place
I turn, I steer, I see a paradise, as soon as my feet hit this beach I chuck my towel on a hill of white sand. I dive into the first humongous wave I see, the water is like it has glitter on top of it. I swim like a fish getting chased by a shark. My fingers start to turn into a prune. I see a school of fish swim by it was amaze balls. The crabs start to bite my toes, it felt like my eyes popped out of my head. Im sorry to say but my adventure is over at my favourite place, New Zealand is a amazing place.
Hi Ruby I am from your buddy class I really like your post because it rhymed and I like how you used discrbing words it made it sound iteresting. I am looking forward to reading some more rhymes.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby I am from your buddy class I really like your post because it rhymed I also like how you used discibing words. I am looking forward to reading some more rhymes.
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