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WALT- write an explication about the human body
Reflection- The human nose can detect about 1 trillion smells . heres a shocking fact Blood makes up about 8 percent of your total body weight.
Hi my name is Hendrix and i go to TAS. I like the way you used complicated words in your post I also liked the way that you used big paragraphs in your explanation about the human body, Maybe next time when you use (i) make it a capital letter (I). Quick question for you what is the heaviest organ in the human body?
Hi my name is Hendrix and i go to TAS. I like the way you used complicated words in your post
ReplyDeleteI also liked the way that you used big paragraphs in your explanation about the human body, Maybe next time when you use (i) make it a capital letter (I). Quick question for you what is the heaviest organ in the human body?
Hi Hendrix i'm ruby and i go to Mangonui school thanks for the feed back the heaviest organ in your body is your skin.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment.