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Friday 2 August 2019

my topic paragraph text

WALT- use a new type of writing stature.

Tendons,ligaments and cartilage are very important to our skeletal system. these 3 elements are just as important as the rest of our skeletal systemImagine if there was no cartilage anywhere it would be so painful to łmove function and play sports. cartilage is like a pillow it helps our bones to not rub and wear out. Tendons connect muscles to bones, and ligaments connect bone to bone.

2 stars and 1 wish I liked how we could use the 3 different ares such as topic sentence xplain  and tie it up. but i wish I new a bit more about TLC (tendons, ligaments,and cartilage)  

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